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I’m going to make
A teenage mistake
And prove to everyone this life
Can be a fun path to take
So grab my hand
And I’ll whisper into your ear
‘lets stop the sands of time
And show the world what we’re made of’
As longs as what could happen
Doesn’t matter
And you love me as I love you
One kiss will seal our fate
Your arms are warm
All we have is tonight
We’ll make this worthwhile
And remember it forever.
Regret can be healed by time
As can pain for the future
But if we can make this time wonderful
We can forget about the rest of our life
So lets make a teenage mistake
Close your eyes
And follow me
And I’ll see you tomorrow.
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a1daisyduck Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007
:aww: Good job Nat. I like it. But something about it is a bit odd...I still really like it though! :+fav: :D
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Lynsadarria Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2007
I know what you mean! i can't figure it out, but I'm thinking the ending doesn't flow quite right
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a1daisyduck Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2007
Yeah, I don't know...Something...Its still good though. I can live with the oddness! :D
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DontFretPrecious Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
It's GREAT! You have a wonderful flow going and I love the whole thing. amazing job!!
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Lynsadarria Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
Thanks :)
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Zombie-Killer Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2007
kinky ;p
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Lynsadarria Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2007
lol, wow... i suppose it kind of is :D i never thought of it like that before
thanks for the fav :)
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Zombie-Killer Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2007
no problemo ;)
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fantasy-writer42 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2007
Positively brilliant. (=
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emmasea Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
sweet!
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